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You can call me Noi! This blog consists of my thoughts. I am just a simple person with BIG dreams! Like the charcoal, hot pressure and extreme heat must be present in order to create a Diamond. I am in the exact same process.
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Back! / Monday, April 03, 2006 @ 8:03 AM
I am back! I cant remember the last time I was not online for more than 2 days. I sure miss everyone but at the same
time the trip helps me clear my mind of unsettled thoughts that I used to have. I am quite dissapointed that I didnt get to swim at all. The people there wouldnt let us swim due to the strong current. They even put a huge sign 'Beware of undercurent. Swim at your own risk.' Anyway I will tell you all about it tommorow. Now, I am too excited to share with you another piece of good news that welcomed me home.
I won the Writing Mini Contest 2! If you can recall, I did mentioned entering myself into 2 competitions. One is the creative writing contest where we had to write a short story with the words 'moon, genuine and scissors'. The mini contest is a poem writing contest. Although I am disspointed that I didnt manage to win both, I am still happy that I won this poem writing contest. This is the first time I let my poem be publicly read! I will definitely be entering the next one happening some time in April. Will let you know the details.Thank you Katie for the winners button! Love it!
You can read the other winner's entries here:
http://www.createblog.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=110512
Therefore now, let me present you with the poem that won. It isnt much I know. I am pretty sure that there are so many better poets out there. Not everyone can write poetry, therefore this gift is meant to be shared. This is the poem based to the theme 'beauty'. I wrote it in a guys perspective. I was also restricted to writing it according to the sonnet style as I am not used to writing that way.The actual poem was longer and more in depth than this.
Beauty
What does beauty mean?
Although my other entry did not win this time, I am still proud of it. It is one of my favourite writings and I will definitely make this experience a learning chapter in my pursuit to improve my writings.
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It is such a lovely night. The light breeze touches my face so gently. I have to close my eyes to really enjoy it. The sound of the trees whistling is like music to my ears. I love being alone with him in this room. Usually we both like to spend time just gazing at the beautiful moon from our window.
I am back! I cant remember the last time I was not online for more than 2 days. I sure miss everyone but at the same
time the trip helps me clear my mind of unsettled thoughts that I used to have. I am quite dissapointed that I didnt get to swim at all. The people there wouldnt let us swim due to the strong current. They even put a huge sign 'Beware of undercurent. Swim at your own risk.' Anyway I will tell you all about it tommorow. Now, I am too excited to share with you another piece of good news that welcomed me home.I won the Writing Mini Contest 2! If you can recall, I did mentioned entering myself into 2 competitions. One is the creative writing contest where we had to write a short story with the words 'moon, genuine and scissors'. The mini contest is a poem writing contest. Although I am disspointed that I didnt manage to win both, I am still happy that I won this poem writing contest. This is the first time I let my poem be publicly read! I will definitely be entering the next one happening some time in April. Will let you know the details.Thank you Katie for the winners button! Love it!
You can read the other winner's entries here:
http://www.createblog.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=110512
Therefore now, let me present you with the poem that won. It isnt much I know. I am pretty sure that there are so many better poets out there. Not everyone can write poetry, therefore this gift is meant to be shared. This is the poem based to the theme 'beauty'. I wrote it in a guys perspective. I was also restricted to writing it according to the sonnet style as I am not used to writing that way.The actual poem was longer and more in depth than this.
Beauty
What does beauty mean?
To have perfect lips and flawless skin?
Is it really necessary to be thin?
Isnt beauty found deep within?
Let me tell you my defination of beauty
She must have her own principles
Not be swayed by uncertainty
Not feel like she is someone helpless
She is so beautiful to me, cant you seeI am attracted to her unique quality
She never fails to make me glee
She is just filled with humility
Just like a flower blooming in spring
Will I ever find the courage to give her this ring?
--Noi Rocker--
--Noi Rocker--
Although my other entry did not win this time, I am still proud of it. It is one of my favourite writings and I will definitely make this experience a learning chapter in my pursuit to improve my writings.
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It is such a lovely night. The light breeze touches my face so gently. I have to close my eyes to really enjoy it. The sound of the trees whistling is like music to my ears. I love being alone with him in this room. Usually we both like to spend time just gazing at the beautiful moon from our window.
Tonight he is different. He has been sitting there on the bed and he has been asking me the same question over and over again. I don’t want to upset him but I really do not want to do it. I am not ready for it yet. I do not want to do it and not put my heart and soul in it. I know I have been attending a course about it but he deserves the best and I don’t want to be a disappointment to him. I want to be genuine about doing it. I know that once it is done, it is going to be the best thing that I have ever done for him. He will be so proud of me, he will tell all his friends about it.
I look at him. He has these puppy eyes. It is so hard to resist. How do I tell him? I took a deep breath and start to walk over to him. He must have sense that I was uncomfortable. Finally, he got up, reached for the scissors and said"Now can you please cut my hair?"
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